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Andrew  Erskine's avatar

I had to stop halfway through and breathe. The way you wrote this mirrors exactly how trauma actually moves—fragmented, urgent, then impossibly quiet. I don’t have anything eloquent to add, only deep respect for your honesty and overwhelming relief that Carter is safe. This is the kind of writing that lingers long after you close the page.

Holding Both - Maria Messer's avatar

Imagine how many times I had to stop while writing it :)

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